Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Sight To See by VinceJay Sight To See by VinceJay
WEBSITE  | MY STOREPATREON | FACEBOOK | tsūPINTEREST | TUMBLR | LINKEDIN | TWITTERINSTAGRAM    


My first real photomanipulation. Really love space, so decided to incorporate some planets/comets into the piece.

For PremiumMembers "Random Phrase Contest"
Phrase : Gathered Universe

Stocks :
Moon - commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Fil…
Planet/Mars - commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Fil…
Clouds - www.flickr.com/photos/sunep/39…
Seagulls - imageafter.com/image.php?image…
Beach - www.wallpaper-universe.com/wal…

Tutorial : designinstruct.com/digital-art…
Program : Photoshop CS5.1

Comments/Critiques are appreciated! =)
Add a Comment:
 
:icondygyt-alice:
I truly like the fact you did it in sepia. It id a great choice and reminder of the movies of old. You did a great job placing the other planets it ads the feeling of outer space. The rocks and closest planet almost lend a 3D effect. I also noticed a hidden pleasure that no one would notice at a glance. I don't even know if you meant to do it but that darn smiling cloud, it caught my eye almost immediately but that's when I thought it was the back end of an old car. Yeah I see people or call them alien and sunset as the planet gets closer. Your added meteors and stars they're going to be what you perfect. Taking out a little more real add more who knows we live in a strange strange world. For a first attempt be proud. I couldn't do it.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
5 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconhera-of-stockholm:
Hello!

This is a beautiful and imaginative work of art and I like the colour scheme.

Just one little word - the smaller planet/moon is halfway not visible, you should not be able to see the stars "trough" it. Now it looks like the stars are actually in front of the moon or that the moon is broken or transparent, which I imagine was not your idea.

Cut out a circular object corresponding with the planet in the same place from the stars layer (or blur them, depending on wich program you use)! When these stars get removed it'd look more real.

Good luck!
/H
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
11 out of 11 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconwolfwings1:
wolfwings1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
really nicly done :>
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you =)
Reply
:iconmeow-neo:
Meow-Neo Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
wow... stunning
& d sepia effect is perfect
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you =)
Reply
:iconpsychogizmo:
psychogizmo Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
GAWD I wish this could be real!!
Reply
:iconroyalmutt:
RoyalMutt Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thats so nice! I love it ^^
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you =)
Reply
:iconcalluna-draconis:
Calluna-Draconis Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, so magical atmosphere :D
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Mission accomplished =) Thanks
Reply
:iconcalluna-draconis:
Calluna-Draconis Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :meow:
Reply
:iconvioletense:
violetense Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student
Are those comet trails in the sky?
I love this.
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
They sure are. I'm glad you enjoy it =)
Reply
:iconconspir:
conspir Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
This is a really nice piece of work you got here! Such a beautiful scene. Nice work!
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you. Truly appreciate it
Reply
:iconyami-joey:
yami-joey Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
This is a very nice photomanip piece :) Awesome work!
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks =)
Reply
:iconheartangelfied:
HeartANGELfied Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
WOW this is really great :) I love the colours you used :D
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you. =)
Reply
:iconheartangelfied:
HeartANGELfied Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
yw :D
Reply
:iconletrainfalldown:
letrainfalldown Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh wow, this is your first manipulation? I'm impressed. This is gorgeous. :heart: It's done pretty well. :)
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yep, it sure is my first. Thank you =)
Reply
:iconletrainfalldown:
letrainfalldown Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
:heart: You're welcome!
Reply
:iconsuper-piepmatz:
super-piepmatz Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this picture very much! its so awesome, amazing and beautiful! :thumbsup: :tighthug:
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the support. Appreciate it =)
Reply
:iconsuper-piepmatz:
super-piepmatz Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you´re very welcome :tighthug:
Reply
:iconkalinereine:
KalineReine Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Professional Writer
So surreal and lovely. <3
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you kindly! =)
Reply
:iconkalinereine:
KalineReine Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Professional Writer
No problem. :meow:
Reply
:iconwintersread:
WintersRead Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Photographer
I really like the colors you've used!! Definitely a favorite :D
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. Appreciate it =)
Reply
:iconof-the-skies:
of-the-skies Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah...beautiful and surreal :)
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks =)
Reply
:iconallyalltheway:
allyalltheway Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that is so pretty and flawless, thats a great manip! good job! :clap:
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you. =)
Reply
:icon16jasmine16:
16Jasmine16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this is an absolutely magnificent manip! It's so unique and beautiful. I love how you added a sepia layer to give it that soft feeling. Can't wait to see more art like this show up in my watch box! :iconlawooplz:
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So happy you enjoy it! =) Can't go wrong with some manips and space related material.
Reply
:iconazuriin:
azuriin Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing! :D
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you
Reply
:iconcoeurdesang:
CoeurDeSang Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
May I add this to my group :iconfeature-us: ?

It is excellent and I think it should be featured here
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yes you may. =) Thank you for the opportunity.
Reply
:iconcoeurdesang:
CoeurDeSang Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Thank you
Reply
:iconcrow-lyn:
crow-lyn Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like this so much! :'D
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you
Reply
:iconstarija:
Starija Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
i love the imagery in here. it actually makes me want to go to space and those places, which is saying a lot, seeing as i'm not much of an oceanic or space person.
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad to hear it caught your attention, especially since you say you're not really a space person. =) It's great to find things outside your ordinary boundaries. Thank you. =)
Reply
:iconburningglory:
BurningGlory Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
That's very beautiful. :)
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you =)
Reply
:iconburningglory:
BurningGlory Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Writer
You're very welcome!
Reply
:iconamt149:
AMT149 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I like the colouring you used for this piece, as well as the composition and the space transitions into the sky smoothly. It's generally well arranged, although the center area is a bit busy and the left area in the top has more white space. It's only a small thing, though, not very noticeable. (I would say it's noticeable at all because the two areas are right next to each other) Perhaps the stars that cross over the moon could have been pulled to the left a little for better balance, but again, it's a small thing and everything else is flawless :3
Reply
:iconvincejay:
VinceJay Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for your feedback. It does seem the left is losing out on some love. Will definitely take into account positioning in future pieces. Thank you =)
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×
  • Photo
  • Art Gifts




Details

Submitted on
May 17, 2012
Image Size
1.1 MB
Resolution
1200×1200
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
2,662
Favourites
269 (who?)
Comments
87
×