A Way Out

Just a few general comments:

1) Save it as a higher res image - it's rather small, and I have to do the whole ctrl+ thing to get a good look at it.

2) Get photo reference for stuff. She's proportionally all over the place, and having some sort of reference to work from (even if it's a quick picture of yourself or a friend, even a male one), will improve your work greatly. No working around this one, just do it.

3) It's all really blurry. If you want focus brought to an area, increase its sharpness with crisp lines (or outlines, whatever), and then areas where focus isn't as necessary you can feel free to blur things a bit.